A
technique that has worked for me when writing a story is using a thought or
saying to spur the beginning of a story, or to shape the views or voice of a
character.
I’ll
give you an example. One day, I forget when exactly, I must’ve been thinking
about the gay debate in America, or simply of relationships in general. Of
that, I am not sure. But I do know that I recorded the following on my phone
for later use as material:
“I
sympathize with the homosexual because it must be difficult to harbor love
interests for a whole gender that doesn’t by default like you back. In other
words, what limits us as guys from approaching a girl we like is our lack of
courage, but a gay holding that same courage has to also be open to offending
his interest.”
I even remember when these words came to my mind.
No it wasn’t magical. I was simply walking down a hallway to the restroom and
poof, those very words came to my mind--exactly how I’ve typed them.
While they must’ve originally been my thoughts
and views toward the gay experience in our society, that is not why I decided
to record this thought for later use. I recorded it because I knew that this
quote could become the views of a character that I can use in later material.
I didn’t know what story would accompany this
quote, or what character would say it, or in what type of scene. I just knew
that there was something in this thought that could spark a discussion between
two characters, or give birth to some sort of action. I wasn’t sure at all, but
I recorded the thought.
A couple of months literally went by before I
even went back to this note. I was writing a short story about the gay debate
in America titled, “Beers, Gays and Straights.” It was a short story for my
online publication, Short Story Guy, which features short stories based on
current events. These news-inspired short stories use a current event to create
a short fiction story that comments or adds to the relevant topic.
In this case, one of the relevant news stories at
the time was the gay debate in America, and I knew I had to produce a short
story for this topic. Guess what? The only material I had to begin was that
very line I had recorded long ago, which I knew would be useful, somehow. I
knew that the view expressed in that saying or quote could come into play
somewhere in the story.
It turns out that I wrote a story about three
young men who got together one day to watch the NCAA March Madness basketball
championship (which was also going on around this time in April). While the
game set the scene, the real focus was to somehow have this story comment on
what was going on in America at the time regarding gay laws. The three men end
up going to a grocery store to shop for food and drinks for the game, and at
the store one of them has an encounter with a seemingly gay man, which makes
this character feel uncomfortable.
All along as I wrote this story, I had that quote
in mind and I still hadn’t used it. Finally, after the encounter at the grocery
store took place, I knew this quote would come to life soon, and it did. It fit
another character perfectly, and he said this quote to his friend to try to
make him sympathize and relate with being gay.
To conclude, I recommend saving any thought or saying that
comes to you however you can. If you carry a smart phone, there are plenty of
apps you can quickly use to record things. You can either type them out in
regular note-taking apps, or use something like Evernote, which synchronizes
your thoughts and notes across devices.
If you don’t have a smart phone, then carry a note-taker.
Whatever the case is, value the thoughts that come to you every day. Life
provides us with material every day, and it is our job to put it to use.
If you catch yourself thinking something or saying something
to yourself, that might be a quote for a character who you can later develop
into a full personality.
Give it a shot! Today, if you have any one of these
thoughts, save it, and try to start a story with that saying by having two
characters talk to each other on a back and forth. Good luck!
Bio:
Jose has an interest in storytelling
(journalism, fiction, nonfiction) and content creation, which has led him to
gain experience in digital communications (writing, editing, web publishing,
and online media). Previously, he worked in education for 10 years at the high
school and university level. He is currently an editor and contributor to Short
Story Guy, an online
current event and modern-day fiction and nonfiction publication. He hosts the Short Story Guy Podcast and manages the site’s social media
accounts.
He graduated from the University of
California, Santa Cruz with a B.A. in Literature and Film, and now lives in Los
Angeles, CA.
For guest-post inquiries, email him at
contact[at]shortstoryguy[dot]com
You can also get in further contact with
Jose via his website, Short Story Guy.
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